Чтение и письмо: повествование с предысторией (Past Perfect Simple и Continuous)
Слова урока · 4
- narrator /nəˈreɪtə/рассказчик
- twist /twɪst/неожиданный поворот
- set the scene /ˌset ðə ˈsiːn/обрисовать обстановку
- opening line /ˈəʊpənɪŋ laɪn/первая строка
Фразы урока · 2
- The first paragraph sets the scene, and the story has a twist at the end.Первый абзац обрисовывает обстановку, и в конце истории неожиданный поворот.
- Start with the opening line you're given — the narrator knows more than the characters.Начните с заданной первой строки — рассказчик знает больше, чем персонажи.
Текст: «Рассказ: «Ключ»»
When Maria finally found the key, she had been searching for nearly two hours, and the last bus had already gone.
She had moved into the flat only three weeks earlier. Up until that evening, everything had gone smoothly: the neighbours were friendly, the landlord had fixed the heating beforehand, and the walk to the station took eight minutes. What she hadn't noticed was that the front door locked itself.
That evening she had gone out to put the rubbish in the bin at the end of the path — thirty seconds, no coat, no phone. A moment later she heard the click. She stood on the step in the cold, staring at a door that, as far as she knew, could only be opened from the inside.
For an hour she tried everything. She rang the neighbours' bell, but they had gone away for the weekend. She walked to the corner shop, only to find it had shut at nine. She had no idea where the landlord lived, and his number was in the phone on the kitchen table.
It was then that it dawned on her: on the day she had moved in, the landlord had mentioned a spare key. «Under the third pot,» he had said, «in case you ever lock yourself out.» At the time she had laughed. Presumably nobody ever did.
There were seven pots along the wall. Sure enough, under the third one — the third from the gate, not from the door — was a small plastic bag. Inside it was the key.
When she opened the door, the clock said eleven. The rubbish, she noticed, was still in her hand. She had been carrying it all along.
Задание
Напишите рассказ (140–170 слов), который начинается с фразы: «When Daniel finally got through to the number, he had been trying for three days.» Выстройте три временных плана: предысторию (Past Perfect / Past Perfect Continuous — что было до и как долго), фон (Past Continuous) и события (Past Simple); покажите, что герой знал и предполагал (as far as he knew, he assumed, he had no idea); дайте поворот (it turned out / to his surprise / only to find) и развязку (in the end / sure enough); оставьте только значимые детали.
Образец ответа
When Daniel finally got through to the number, he had been trying for three days. The number belonged to a woman called Ruth, and as far as he knew, she had his wallet. He had lost it on the Edinburgh train the previous Friday; a week earlier he had put a note inside with his name and an old phone number — a number he no longer used. Up until Tuesday he had assumed the wallet was gone for good. Then an email arrived: someone called Ruth had found it and left a number. He had been calling that number every evening while he was cooking, only to hear the engaged tone. On Thursday, to his surprise, a man answered. It turned out that Ruth was his mother; she was eighty-one and had been ringing Daniel's old number all week, wondering why nobody picked up. In the end, they met at the station café. Sure enough, the wallet was untouched — except for a note in careful handwriting: «Next time, write a number that works.»
lightbulbРассказ B2: первая строка → предыстория (had done / had been doing) → фон (was doing) → события (did) → точка зрения героя → поворот (it turned out) → развязка (in the end) с одной запоминающейся деталью.
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