Чтение и письмо: противоречивые источники (атрибуция) — урок 9 темы «Итоговая практика С2», английский C2

Чтение и письмо: противоречивые источники (атрибуция)

4 слова · 2 фразы

Слова урока · 4

  • the honest number /ði ˌɒnɪst ˈnʌmbə/честное число
  • design condition /dɪˈzaɪn kənˌdɪʃn/условие проектирования
  • extended piece /ɪkˌstendɪd ˈpiːs/развёрнутый текст
  • stand alone /ˌstænd əˈləʊn/стоять самостоятельно

Фразы урока · 2

  • The honest number is the one after displacement is netted off; the bays are a design condition, not a reason to stop.Честное число — то, что остаётся после вычета перемещения; места — условие проектирования, а не повод остановиться.
  • An extended piece integrates; it does not summarise in turn — and the conclusion must stand alone for a reader who skipped the middle.Развёрнутый текст интегрирует; он не резюмирует по очереди; а вывод должен стоять самостоятельно для читателя, пропустившего середину.

Текст: «Два текста и запись: велополоса на Хай-стрит через полгода»

SOURCE PACK — THE HIGH STREET CYCLE LANE, END OF TRIAL

TEXT A — Transport planner's trial report (extract)
Weekday cycle counts on the High Street rose from a baseline mean of 210 to 294 per day (+40 %) over the six-month trial (automatic counters, both directions). Weekend counts rose 18 %. Counts on the river path, the nearest parallel route, fell 15 % over the same period; the data are consistent with part of the High Street increase being displacement. Recorded collisions on the street: two (minor) during the trial against three in the preceding six months — a difference too small to interpret. The kerbside alignment removed two of three disabled parking bays outside the pharmacy in month four; this was not identified at design stage and is a defect of the scheme. An alternative alignment taking one metre from the general traffic lane would restore both bays while preserving a 0.5 m door-zone buffer. Recommendation: extend the trial by six months with the alternative alignment implemented first.

TEXT B — Letter from the Access Forum to the council
For eleven months the Forum has asked why two of the three disabled bays outside the pharmacy vanished, and for eleven months the council, with characteristic speed, has considered the question. We will be plain. «Safe», from where our members sit, means being able to get from a car to the pharmacy door. The lane may well be safe for cyclists; it is not safe for us, and no count of bicycles changes that. The Forum does not oppose cycle lanes. It opposes a scheme designed without the people it displaced. We ask that the bays be restored before any extension is considered, and that the drawing be shared with us before, not after, the decision.

TRANSCRIPT — Pharmacy owner at the traders' meeting
«Twenty-three of us saw no change in the till. Four saw a fall, and I was one. I blamed the lane in March. Then I looked at when my fall started — month four, the week the bays went — and my prescription customers went with them. So it wasn't the lane; it was the bays. Give me the bays back and I'm for the lane. That's not what I said in the spring, and the numbers changed my mind, which I'd rather admit than pretend I always thought so.»

Задание

Напишите самостоятельный развёрнутый текст (340–380 слов) для совета: «Should the High Street cycle lane be extended, and on what terms?» — интегрируя три источника по вопросам, не по источникам: сопоставимость и что значит «safe» и «work» у каждого; честное число с вычетом перемещения (the honest number); уровень каждого расхождения (definition, judgement) и где источники сходятся (converge); подтекст письма Форума с доказательством (the choice of the word; irony at whose expense; what the Forum does not ask for); пересмотр позиции владельца аптеки как свидетельство (for the record; what changed his mind); сильнейшее возражение и шаг, который не работает; соразмерная рекомендация с условием проектирования, датой и правилом остановки; своя оценка с калиброванной уверенностью по подвопросам и что изменило бы её. Вывод должен стоять самостоятельно.

Образец ответа

Should the High Street cycle lane be extended, and on what terms?
The three sources ask different questions in the same words. For the planner (A), «work» means use and safety; for the Access Forum (B), «safe» means reaching the pharmacy door from a car; for the pharmacy owner, the question is takings. Aligned on the council's question — extend, and on what terms — they converge more than they appear to.
Use. A establishes a 40 % rise in weekday counts on the street over six months; netted against the 15 % fall on the river path, which A itself flags as displacement, the honest number is roughly 20 % more cycling overall. High confidence that use rose; moderate on the size, since one parallel route was counted. Safety: two collisions against three is, in A's own words, too small to interpret, and I say nothing more about it.
Access. B's implied position is sharper than its request. The choice of «scheme» over «lane», and the irony of «with characteristic speed» — at the council's expense, not the cyclists' — signal anger at process; but what the Forum does not ask for is telling: it does not ask for the lane to go. It asks for the bays first and the drawing before the decision. That is a disagreement of sequence, not of principle.
Trade. Twenty-three of thirty-one surveyed owners saw no change; four saw a fall. The pharmacy owner's account is the most useful single piece of evidence in the pack precisely because it is a revision: he blamed the lane in March, dated his fall to the week the bays went, and says for the record that the numbers changed his mind. His fall is evidence about the bays, not the lane — and he is one of four, not a rule.
The strongest case against extension is B's, put at its strongest: for a wheelchair user, two bays gone is the pharmacy gone, and no count of bicycles offsets that. I concede it entirely. Where the argument fails is the step from «the bays went» to «no extension»: A's alternative alignment takes a metre from the traffic lane, restores both bays and keeps a door-zone buffer. The bays are a design condition, not a reason to stop.
Recommendation. Extend for six months, on condition that the alternative alignment is built first and the drawing is shared with the Forum before the vote; stopping rule: revert if injuries rise or a majority of surveyed shops report falls. What would change my recommendation is an engineer's finding that the metre cannot be taken from the traffic lane; then the bays come first and the lane waits. On this evidence: extend, bays first, moderate confidence.

lightbulbИтоговый текст: выровнять по вопросу (что значит «work» и «safe») → честное число с вычетом → подтекст доказать (слово, ирония, чего не просят) → пересмотр как свидетельство → steelman, concede, the step that fails → соразмерная рекомендация с условием, датой и правилом остановки → уверенность по подвопросам; вывод стоит один.

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