Чтение и письмо: полемическое эссе (градация и контраргумент) — урок 9 темы «Полемика и публичная аргументация», английский C2

Чтение и письмо: полемическое эссе (градация и контраргумент)

4 слова · 2 фразы

Слова урока · 4

  • polemic /pəˈlemɪk/полемическое сочинение
  • alternative /ɔːlˈtɜːnətɪv/альтернатива
  • signpost /ˈsaɪnpəʊst/обозначить структуру
  • proportionate /prəˈpɔːʃənət/соразмерный

Фразы урока · 2

  • A polemic argues one side — fairly, if it is any good; state the alternatives accurately before you reject them.Полемика доказывает одну сторону — честно, если чего-то стоит; изложите альтернативы точно, прежде чем отвергать.
  • Signpost: first the case, then the objection, then the answer — and a proportionate conclusion asks for what the evidence supports.Обозначьте структуру: сначала довод, потом возражение, потом ответ; а соразмерный вывод просит того, что поддерживают данные.

Текст: «Полемическое эссе: «Let them sleep — but let us pay»»

LET THEM SLEEP — BUT LET US PAY

I want to argue for something smaller than the headline. Not that every secondary school should open at ten, but that the schools which ask to should be allowed to try — for two years, with the first year's costs met from the centre, and with the results published whether they flatter the idea or bury it.

The case rests on three things, and I will put the weakest last. First, adolescent sleep runs late: the evidence from sleep laboratories is consistent that the teenage body clock shifts by roughly two hours, and no amount of parental firmness moves it back. Second, where a later start has been tried, attendance rose and lateness fell — in both published trials, by amounts that would be called significant if a new textbook had produced them. Third, and weakest, road accidents involving pupils fell in the trial areas; the numbers are small, and I claim no more than that they point the right way.

Now the case against, which is better than its opponents usually admit. It is not that change is uncomfortable. It is that a later start is a later finish, and a later finish is paid for by working parents in childcare, by pupils in lost part-time work, and by the poorest families most, because they are the ones who cannot buy the afternoon. In the trial schools, thirty per cent of families reported higher costs in the first year. That is a real number, and anyone who waves it away has not understood the objection.

There is a second alternative, and it deserves stating properly: leave the day alone and move the sleep instead — screen curfews, consistent bedtimes, later homework deadlines. This is cheaper, disturbs no bus and no employer, and it was tested in the same schools. It moved sleep by ten minutes. The later start moved it by forty. I do not say the curfew is worthless; I say it is a quarter of the answer, and we have been offering it as the whole.

So where does the cost objection actually bite? Not on whether a later start works, but on who pays for the year in which the town rearranges itself around it. In year two of the same trial, the thirty per cent had fallen to eight, because buses were rescheduled, clubs moved and employers adjusted — as they do after every timetable change we have ever made. The objection is therefore an argument about transition, and the honest response to a transition cost is to fund the transition, not to forbid the destination.

I concede what should be conceded. The exam results are untested; I do not claim them. The eight per cent who still pay more in year two are real, and a trial that does not target them is a trial that has learned nothing from its own critics. And the schools that volunteered so far were better-off than average, which means the attendance gain has been shown for schools like them and not yet for schools unlike them — which is an argument for testing in such schools, not for assuming.

Let them sleep, then — but let us pay: the first year funded, the eight per cent covered, a stopping rule at two terms, and the data published. That is not a revolution. It is the smallest experiment that would settle a question we have been arguing about for twenty years on the strength of no evidence at all.

Задание

Напишите полемическое эссе (320–360 слов) на противоположную сторону — против пробы позднего старта в вашей школе или за иную альтернативу (например, за «сдвинуть сон, а не день» или за «сначала финансировать уход за детьми независимо от старта»): точный тезис с границами и бременем (I argue that …, in the sense of …; what I am not claiming; the burden is on those who …); сильнейшая версия довода за пробу, изложенная так, чтобы Рид подписался (the best case for the trial runs as follows; put at its strongest); опровержение в точке (the premise is true; the conclusion does not follow; this proves too much; the evidence cuts the other way); честная уступка и сужение (I concede; where we actually differ is; that leaves the question of); одна риторическая фигура с сохранённой оговоркой; соразмерный вывод и условие пересмотра (what would change my mind is …).

Образец ответа

Fund the afternoon first
I argue for something the later-start campaign keeps promising and never delivers: money for the afternoon. My claim is narrow. I do not say that teenagers do not need sleep, and I do not say the school day can never move. I say that before any school in this county trials a ten o'clock start, the childcare and transport costs that such a start imposes should be funded and in place — because if they are not, the trial will be paid for by the families least able to pay, and the burden of proof is on those who ask them to.
The best case for the trial, put at its strongest, is this: adolescent sleep runs about two hours late; two trials found attendance up and lateness down; the first-year cost fell from thirty per cent of families to eight in year two; and the cheaper alternative — curfews — moved sleep by ten minutes against forty. Dr Reid would sign that, and so would I.
Where it fails is one step. «The cost fell to eight per cent in year two» is true; «therefore the transition is affordable» does not follow, because the eight per cent were not random. In the trial schools, whose free-meals rate was eleven per cent against a county average of twenty-two, the families still paying in year two were the poorest; in a school like ours, with twice the share of such families, the residual would not be eight per cent but something nearer twenty, and it would not fall, because the people it falls on cannot rearrange their employers. This proves too much in the other direction as well: if a temporary cost is always a reason to proceed, no cost is ever a reason to pause.
I concede the science entirely, and the forty minutes, and the attendance gain — for schools like the trial schools. Where we actually differ is the order of operations: Reid says trial first and fund the transition; I say fund first and then trial, because a trial that runs before the money is a trial on the poorest. That leaves the question of whether the money would ever come without a trial to force it — and I grant that is a real risk.
Not sleep or money; sleep and money, in that order — no, in the other order. What would change my mind is a funding commitment signed before the first bell moves: then I would vote for the trial tomorrow.

lightbulbПолемическое эссе: узкий тезис с границами и бременем → steelman, который подпишет оппонент → опровержение в точке (does not follow; proves too much; cuts the other way) с конкретным основанием → I concede; where we actually differ; that leaves the question of → одна фигура с оговоркой → what would change my mind.

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