Чтение и письмо: заметки и связный текст (связность абзацев) — урок 9 темы «Выступления и обсуждения», английский B2

Чтение и письмо: заметки и связный текст (связность абзацев)

4 слова · 2 фразы

Слова урока · 4

  • bullet point /ˈbʊlɪt pɔɪnt/пункт списка
  • cue /kjuː/подсказка (в заметках)
  • flesh out /ˌfleʃ ˈaʊt/развернуть, наполнить
  • flow /fləʊ/связность, плавность

Фразы урока · 2

  • Turn the bullet points into paragraphs; my cue cards have one line each.Превратите пункты списка в абзацы; на моих карточках-подсказках по одной строке.
  • Flesh out each point with an example, then read it aloud to check the flow.Разверните каждый пункт примером, затем прочитайте вслух, чтобы проверить связность.

Текст: «Заметки для выступления: «Общественный сад — год первый»»

Speaker's notes — Mill Street Community Garden, first-year report (council meeting, 5 min)

HOOK
• 40 beds, 40 families, 1 derelict plot → ask: who here has eaten something grown on Mill Street? (show tomato)

PLAN
• 2 points: what worked / what didn't → 1 request

1. WHAT WORKED
• all 40 beds let by March (waiting list: 23)
• 61 % of holders never grew anything before → the classroom: 9 workshops, 140 children
• key: garden = skills + neighbours, not just vegetables (Ashford figure: 55 % came back to learn)

2. WHAT DIDN'T
• water: standpipe too far → 2 beds abandoned in July
• cost of raised beds (contaminated corner): +£4,000 over budget → covered from reserve, reserve now £900
• the orchard: not planted — grant refused in Nov (reason: no classroom yet — chicken and egg)

REQUEST
• £6,000 for: 2nd standpipe (£1,500) + 15 more beds (£4,500)
• expected: waiting list cleared; 15 more families; running costs covered by bed rents (£40 × 55 = £2,200/yr)
• plan B if refused: standpipe only (£1,500) from bed rents over 2 yrs

CLOSE
• «A year ago this was a fence and a bin. Now it's the only place in the street where three generations talk to each other.» → over to questions

Задание

Превратите заметки в связный текст выступления (200–240 слов), который можно произнести за пять минут: зацепка и план (I'd like to start by …, I'll cover two points), два раздела с указателями (to begin with, moving on to / that brings me to), отсылки и переходы (this, such, the same applies, having said that, to put it another way, which brings me to), просьба с ожидаемым результатом и планом Б, финал с контрастом; расставьте паузы «|» в двух-трёх ключевых предложениях и выделите ЗАГЛАВНЫМИ одно ударное слово в каждом из них.

Образец ответа

First of all, thank you for the time. I'd like to start by asking a question: who here has eaten something grown on Mill Street? This tomato came from bed 17. A year ago, that bed was a derelict plot behind a fence. I'll cover two points — what worked and what didn't — and then make one request.
To begin with, what worked. All forty beds were let by March, and there is a waiting list of twenty-three families. More striking, 61 % of the bed holders had never grown anything before, which is why the classroom matters: nine workshops, a hundred and forty children. The point I want to make is this | the garden is SKILLS and neighbours | not just vegetables. Ashford's figure — 55 % of visitors came back to learn — applies here too.
Having said that, not everything worked, which brings me to my second point. The standpipe is too far from the back beds, and two were abandoned in July. The raised beds in the contaminated corner cost £4,000 over budget; we covered this from the reserve, which now stands at £900. And the orchard was not planted, because the grant was refused — no classroom yet, a chicken-and-egg problem.
That brings me to the request: £6,000, for a second standpipe and fifteen more beds. The expected outcome is a cleared waiting list and fifteen more families, with running costs covered by rents of £2,200 a year. If the full sum is refused, plan B is the standpipe alone, paid from rents over two years.
To conclude | a year ago this was a fence and a BIN. | Now it is the only place in the street where three generations talk to each other. Over to questions.

lightbulbИз заметок в текст: hook + план → to begin with → the point I want to make → having said that / which brings me to → that brings me to the request → expected outcome + plan B → финал с контрастом; разметьте паузы и ударения.

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